Security is very intense in the airport
TV showed fires on the news
Car is old
She’s the only one in every day clothes
Where the car is parked is abnormal
Why is there strong security in the airport including the military?
The aeroplane ride was a bit bumpy towards London. Most of the journey, I was just thinking about my actual home back in America. What is the point of coming to England. The weather is rubbish.
As I land, I realise that there is military everywhere in the airport. Why? Anyway I just want to get to where I need to be.
October 7, 2014 at 12:30 pm
Hello Harry,
You seem to have taken on the character and expressed feelings using a variety of sentence structures.
Target: look at your use of vocabulary – would ‘areoplane’ be appropriate vocabulary for a teenage girl? Use your planning to develop who your character is and how they speak.