I can’t stop thinking about life. Why are we here? What happened’s after life? Is there a key to heaven or hell?
My life is balanced between happiness or sadness. It never stops bugging me. Sometimes I think I’m in a drama on TV but that’s just me. Life has its highs like the tree in my garden and its lows like the Atlantic ocean. Life is like a box of chocolates. You just don’t know what your gonna get.
Class work 03/10/14
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Hello Harry,
Your first paragraph starts well and immediately gives an indication of your character’s mood.
Target: your second paragraph is not as strong and would be greatly improved if you were to build in visual clues that indicate your character’s emotions. Write a plan to help develop this.
React!